Eternal_Jiminii

Everything just feels forced here bro, the way he picks girls and acts as if he care for them deeply when they have just me. U make the MC have a shot temper which isn't good to our liking, like he is angered over simple things like hitting at his sister, bro she is old enough to fend herself. All in all, the novel is actually very promising. But it feels forced, like being a noble is no joke bro but you make it seem like nothing which kills the mystery and curiosity about their background. Anyway what WE request is, make the plot less predictable, less forced towards his love interests, mysterious background by revealing less at a time. A colourful future with interesting story♡♡.

Bro get to make us feel like it's a real battle. I feel like my IQ dropped there. Everything looks simple which makes the all thing boring. No offence but it's the truth....

We like your work, it's really refreshing to read. Just DON'T drop any of your work please, it's additive.

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Don't worry about it. Am a man of culture rest assured....

Yeah for harem yes and action. The harem is a big one so yeah...

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Thanks for your great work. It's quite refreshing to read. Anyway am a new Author so my words are guinine. My novel is 'God Of Souls.' Good luck*