S_Toi

In two words: extremely good 👍 I love the idea and the story is very smooth. It's easy to read and absolutely great. The character has a development but I wonder just if he will be able to fight as he let the others think he should without his powers

Either one or three (shadows or reality)

The character and the backstory are both incredibly good with a complex and dark Naruto. The author shows very well the complexity of the MHA world from a point of view that one can only see from the shadow of society. The point of view of the character may seem extreme but in such a world, it's clearly needed, think about it, if All for One had been killed instead of arrested, it would have been clearly better and safer because anyone can break into the jail but if All for One break out, he's nearly unstoppable (unless even after one hundred years of using powers, he still can't use them that well he shouldn't have lost to All Might...) The only problem I can see in the whole story is the title which clearly isn't suited and doesn't give justice to the jewel it is. Yes, there might be a slight harem part but it's clearly not even one percent of the story

Thanks a lot for this story, while not the best I ever read, the story was both enjoyable and well written. I sincerely recommend it to anyone who may read this. Thank you author-san [img=recommend]

It was quite good. For the backstory the author created, that and the quality of the wording, I think that it's one of my favorite GOT fanfic Please continue like that!

I must say that it's definitely one of the best GOT fanfic I read in my whole life. It's well written, the character evolved and the author created backgrounds suitable with the original but not entirely based on that. He made his own inputs and is one of the only GOT fanfic writer who managed to make the reincarnated hero (Harry Potter) not become overpowered but still quite strong. The point is that he isn't the only strong person in this world. Harry has evolved and isn't just a naive, positive or negative character. He has insecurities but has learned to go against them. I gave 5 stars in background development due to the work on the story and background : even if it's a fanfic. The author made his own system, characters and gave them each his individuality. Thanks for this novel ! Please continue like that !

Quite well written. It was a pleasure to read even though English is not my main language. The words flew naturally and beautifully. Continue writing this way please

I'd just like to say that if you disregard the dark magic and the fact that his means are quite questionable, Grindelwald, unlike Voldy, fights for a worthy cause and even if I don't believe him to be absolutely right, I think he raises a point : just imagine 40 years after Harry Potter. The secret will surely break and then it will be a war. I think that the fight of Grindelwald is to protest his people: for the greater good even if his means are qui questionable which is why I don't particularly like the comparison with Voldemort and the fact that he's viewed as evil or as mad by his own son... Despite that, I think your chapter is quite well written and I'll make sure to enjoy it. Thanks 🙏

It's the second time you copy Tyrant of Steel with this iconic moment when the hero is speaking to a peasant...

Whouah ! Isn't your introduction blablant plagiarism ? (It's just the same as one of my favourite novels Tyrant of Steel)