MangaisLife1

RashCore/AUTHOR -I had some suggestions I hope you can look at but I wanted to first say your story is amazing. Thank you for not making MC stupid and whining about I dont want to change future as that can cause butterfly effect. o many people whine about that.  My suggestions Lifespan- You mentioned levels like S, and then mentioned ex level which can content with Demi gods.  You mentioned how MC knows about dungeons, artifacts etc places in the world with cheats but he is too weak to go out and get them. I wanted to say that you should definitely look into expanding your levels. Lets say there is S, SS,SSS, EX, Transcendent, Demi God, God  This way you can decide at a certain level that lifespan increases. Lets say you say at SS level you evolve as a being and gain more lifespan. As you keep growing you can keep getting higher lifespan and eventually become immortal.  Also you can introduce the concept of bloodlines in there. Lets say in one dungeon there are drops of demi god bloodline drops. By taking these drops of blood, Mc and Valerie will have potential to reach demi god level. After that it is up to them. This increases his potential and Valeries.  Also you can also even include higher world. Lets say this is a lower world and after you reach certain level EX or Transcendent you can go to an upper world. In that world are stronger beings, more magic, skills, academies, sects etc.This way you could even expand that there are higher Levels then God, God Lord, God King, God Emperor. You could say that even if God level are immortal lifespan they can be killed by stronger beings. 

AUTHOR/CHAMPIONDOG I wanted to give you some recommendation and I hope you can take a look..... but first I wanted to say this novel is absolutely amazing. I am really strict reviewer but seeing someone make a smart MC who does not blush and have nose bleeds but takes action for what he wants is amazing. Also most authors fail because MC is whining about not wanting to change the future, or steal opportunities but its awesome you made MC utilize his skills, steal opportunities, and get maximum benefits from everywhere. Thank you for not making MC a dense idiot. My Recommendation:LIFESPAN- So far you have not covered Lifespan and a really good thing to integrate would be that as you increase levels you gain lifespan and past a certain point you become a higher being. You have mentioned about higher Demi Gods, or gods etc they are not mundane with simple lifespans so I definitely think including lifespans would be good since that would mean he can become immortal along with the harem. Also it would be important as well to include longer lifespans since that will let MC grow slowly without rushing story. Another thing is that he needs to make a force using his inlaws power- Why does he need a force? Well he knows majority of the good people from his past life so why not let Alice's dad, and aurelias dad join and make a guild or city. They can handle the money growth etc and he can benefit by not having to do everything himself like trying to make money which seems absurd. Another thing is why so far he has not utilized the fox tribe properly. I mean he has a 1000 people there. I would think he would take them to tower of destiny and get them to level up. He could power level 50 or so strongest people from the tribe. Then eventually those people will help other people level up etc. Also why hasnt he helped alera and lilith upgrade their weapons either? ---- Also the story could go on for a long time since there are numerous worlds and you can make war between worlds a theme. This way he can get stronger and go further and you can write more than just defending his world. Lets say each world has a will (consciousness) and the world wants to grow. There are lower world (low mana), middle world, higher world (high mana resources)Worlds want to evolve so they initiate wars between worlds to grow. So lets say world 1 fights a war with world 2- 1. For the first battle world 1 and 2 send 1000 people each up to level 2 to fight. 2. Then there can be period of break in between and then 3000 people up to level 3.These battles keep going on until one world loses or the world will can sever the connection but doing so also loses resources Whichever world wins the battle a certain portion of resources such as mana, resources like plants, minerals etc for potions will be absorbed into the world that won from the world that lost This way you can keep the in laws, and harem members relevant as mc can fight alongside them and grow. In addition with this you can always include mc traveling to other or realms to grow etc

AUTHOR/ I_Cook_Limitlessly I wanted to give you some recommendation and I hope you can take a look..... but first I wanted to say this novel is absolutely amazing. I am really strict reviewer but seeing someone make a smart MC who does not blush and have nose bleeds but takes action for what he wants is amazing. Thank you for not making MC a dense idiot. My Recommendation:LIFESPAN- Is one thing you should definitely think about introducing. As for how to introduce I had several ideas. So far you have not covered Lifespan increase with higher levels You have mentioned about higher beings and clearly those beings are not mundane with simple lifespans so I definitely think including lifespan increases would be good since that would mean he can become immortal. So you could always include that when you clear the 30th floor you undergo a change and get lifespan increase as you evolve Also from then on higher levels also accompany more lifespan ---- You mentioned different worlds Lets say each world has a will (consciousness) and the world wants to grow. There are lower world , middle world, higher world .Worlds want to evolve so they initiate wars between worlds to grow. So lets say world 1 fights a war with world 2- 1. For the first battle world 1 and 2 send 1000 people etc up to bronze 2. Then there can be period of break in between and then 3000 silver .These battles keep going on until one world loses or the world will can sever the connection but doing so also loses resources Whichever world wins the battle a certain portion of resources resources etc will be absorbed into the other world that won from the world that lost In addition with this you can always include mc traveling to other worlds which can allow for more adventures. This way you can make different scenarios for different worlds which have different inheritances or skills etc

Thanks for taking a look ! Its hard to come across novels this good and just wanted to give some feedback...hope you keep continuing with the awesome novel

Yeah I am considering eventually dropping it since one their loyalties started out way to insanely high, so had to not work to improve. Also MC is a virgin so i thought he would try to improve relationships with women he could never has in his previous life or dream of. They are throwing themselves at him but he is like nah and ignoring it.. he also has a ridiculous amount of points etc so almost everything can be taken care of with that summons etc so he does have some time for romance but is out here treating the wife and concubines like nothing? I mean truly makes no freaking sense how MC gets turned on by maids but then the wife/concubines he is holding back on smh just stupid. Also he can empathize with soldiers, understand other people so he understands emotions but is treating his wives so distantly. It really makes no sense smh

CHEAP copy of trash of the counts family or greatest estate developer MC's personality is too annoying and lazy. He is too unlikeable as a person. He is anti social wants to be left alone and doesnt have any ambition to help or do anything for his family unless he is forced into it

I found a DIAMOND! I am actually shocked. Author WHAT IS THIS? You actually made a smart MC authors arent supposed to do that MC isnt dense and makes a move on the heroines instead of having nose bleeds. When he like the MILF makes a move on the aunt too my man. You really doing this right MC actually doesnt whine about not changing the plot or have long moral dilemmas about the plot changing if he does something but uses the knowledge to steal opportunities and grow Why author? its not supposed to be like this. So many other authors MC are like If I change something then I dont know the future anymore let me not do anything smh So far this has potential and the MC is utilizing the opportunities to grow and become stronger. This has really good potential dont screw this up

AUTHOR/Forgetful_Sage  I wanted to give you some recommendation and I hope you can take a look..... but first I wanted to say this novel is absolutely amazing. I am really strict reviewer but seeing someone make a smart MC who does not blush and have nose bleeds but takes action for what he wants is amazing. Also most authors fail because MC is whining about not wanting to change the future, or steal opportunities but its awesome you made MC utilize his skills, steal opportunities, and get maximum benefits from everywhere. Thank you for not making MC a dense idiot. My Recommendation:LIFESPAN- Since you wrote this about magic (not cultivation) then according to most magic its 1-9 circle mages and above that is usually transcendent mage (immortal lifespan) So far you have not covered Lifespan and a really good thing to integrate would be that as you increase mage/knight levels you gain lifespan. You have mentioned about higher beings and clearly higher being who can oversee contracts or etc are not mundane with simple lifespans so I definitely think including lifespans would be good since that would mean he can become immortal.Also since he is usually ignorant in the barren land and will go to new continent then that lifespan concept could be introduced there, and it would make sense. Also his mom/dad, in laws , aunt, harem members it would be important as well to include longer lifespans since that will let MC grow slowly without rushing story.Clearly his harem members will possibly have their own adventures in different worlds a decade or more, so having them gone for a long time will make sense if increasing lifespan with more levels is a thing. You mentioned potions but the potions for lifespan increase is more temporary measure but including lifespan increase with levels is better. Also he could eventually use potions for things like enhancing family /inlaws talent. So lets say MC goes to new continent once he has some strength he brings over family/in laws. He also also uses potions etc to increase their talent. Also the family/in laws make a force under them. Why does he need a force?Well you could make a storyline that after 9 circle mage you can go to upper world which is another world with even higher realms or they need a force with them since there are several continents fighting on the planet he is on for resources or you can make a war of the world scenario.  ---- Lets say each world has a will (consciousness) and the world wants to grow. There are lower world (low mana), middle world, higher world (high mana resources)Worlds want to evolve so they initiate wars between worlds to grow. So lets say world 1 fights a war with world 2- 1. For the first battle world 1 and 2 send 1000 people each up to level 2 to fight.  2. Then there can be period of break in between and then 3000 people up to level 3.These battles keep going on until one world loses or the world will can sever the connection but doing so also loses resources  Whichever world wins the battle a certain portion of resources such as mana, resources like plants, minerals etc for potions will be absorbed into the world that won from the world that lost This way you can keep the in laws, and harem members relevant as mc can fight alongside them and grow. In addition with this you can always include mc traveling to other worlds such as elven world, beast world, lets say he is in lower mortal world, there can be middle mortal world, etc which can allow for more adventures and more harem members. Basically higher world or other worlds can have their Heroines of Destiny as well as Protagonists he has to take down. This way you can make different scenarios for different worlds.  

Foreal IDK why so many authors are using weird weapons like bricks? I mean you smash one person at a time with it ? While with sword cultivation or other weapons intent you can kill numerous people at once

200 Chapters and nothing on romance front ahh so its one of those useless romances where FL is a vase smh