too much water i read all avaible chapter paid and only two talisman ? too much character it goes everywhere it started good but you have to ruin it i m sad really. an because there s so much people i can t remember who is who name are so similar etc there s no 'characteristics' to the people no depth just a name an identity and that s it, and explaination for a small things goes for an entire chapter, one taliman 50 chap ? bro it s not a dissertation but a book, good idea but lame, anyone can write that way just nonsense onto nonsense, and everything is too perfect no challenge for mc really. oh i want that oh it s there. just use your life as a template or how can people relate ? keep going i hope for your sucess bye

it s a good idea but for me the jail and the ultra long simulation is too much, whatever the case a jail in a cultivation world ? at least the jail of a little sect so there can be some movements or something and 30 pages for 24 h shows how tiring it is personaly, other may like it but fantasy makes you want to see brighter things not jails and cells. i mean i hope to see faster movement toward the story and not i cultivate in a cell until i kill everyone or i can finally teleport out. sad because the start was good with the old man thingy, can t you skip at least a bit ? i hope that helps for a rewiew i read so much books but i know it s hard to write one, guild wars was good i guess but jail it s too much. anyway good luck

you are so right never seen something that bad 20 chap for useless drama so boring no creativity 😐😔

may the water be with you, people like water but in every page ? sadge..

please be more positive, his life is too tragic before and after. this story is too dark for me

i wanted to try but the sura Roosevelt reapteat each times is so annoying to read why not just write shura only? sorry i can t read this good luck

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pandemic this that, tv programmed it suk

really good story need more plsssssszsss

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completed ? why stopping.. nn

came for a system and ended in a romance setting well written but not my taste, why make a system so useless

good good add moreeeeeeee please thanks .

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

even better than i thought please push it up

bro you just started with webnovel (lvl1) this is one of the best really, what world building ? we will know as it goes on it is just the beginning and it s useless to put useless descriptions. every book with high level world building is rare. at least put 4stars xD too harsh if you don t like it go to romance section and you will like useless world building so the mc feels above the world. it is just a translation so go to the one who wrote it and let us have fun with a good system :) ty

thanks for the good book ;) you deserve my praise ! 5 stars

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who want bad raw?