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what the hell is that jiggle

read it yourself once. the first 10 chapters have a lot of grammatical mistakes.

that requires precise control of chakra or life energy, in this case. right now, he doesn't know anything about chakra. so he will have to invent a whole power system that works before he can even think of performing jutsu or any of that shit. an alternative to that would be an inherent skill or ability to sense and control life energy. in other words, plot. that too can be enjoyable if done properly. so do your own thing. take the advice that you think is good, leave out the rest.

it was an interesting idea though .

he isn't learning any jutsu as he doesn't know jack about chakra or hand seals, the entire shabang. unless plot requires for it, of course.

this entire story feels like an afterthought. the characters have 2 brain cells each. although writing quality is bad, with lots of mistakes, at least it's readable.

as are you , Mr hyuga glazer

and shisui... was a fool like no other.

all the best brother

that's a zesty skill.