Sup, I like reading books and manga, also like watching anime.
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When you kill somone it lets thw devil fruit goes free meaning a pirate could get it and become as srrong as these,thats why they are jailed up
ooga booga
the moment he realises everything is when the novel ends
Special way of saying he has been with many women
its likw a quest inside of a quest
Its pretty good just sounds a bit bland to be honest but can be approved with more editing. Other than that i feel that some of the characters arent portayed as their actual personality but with a bit of deviation. Other than that pretty good.
Just above you said he was acting franticlly but now when speaking je is really calm, too quick of a transition.
till you accidently glance at the granny living next door and they lock you up and cut off your limbs so you stay there forever
you never know ith the mc they might want to hide their cultivation for no ranfom reason
8-th grade syndrome hit him hard