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I liked it very much, the story flow is very good, the character interactions are not left behind. Keep writing, I want to keep reading.[img=Your move]

In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.

dude rong chap

Do you have a chance the much more update, this is not enough.[img=Your move]

I don't like irina sorry bro this chapters is bad for me (too forced relationship)

Dude irina just annoying tftc

too long chapters for the bill pls reduce this writing style (Bill couldn't care less)You repeat this 3-5 times or there are others similar, please don't do it.

Couldn't it be better if sunny was angry with cassie?she turned man life upside down and he was chatting with her at the cafe as if nothing happen(I now she doesn't remember)still i kill her 3 times.

i hope its not that elf b***h(The character got on my nerves)and pls torture that royal ba***ds king and prince[img=Feeling it]

After a while, I personally didn't like the writing style, character description and interaction, so I left it ch324