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Why was the fic taken down? Is it because it was a translation? I am new to this, seeing a book getting taken down, is WN taking action against translations or other fics too?
Which ones? I mean, were they translations too?
Now I feel stupid
Considering what Kenshin did at 5....
They probably would suspect something. But the problem is not that. The Plane is dead. The tree has no leaves, the grass is just dead, is dark and Elea hasn't been told about it because it's part of the reason why he was killed, so they don't want a child to know about it. Elea, who doesn't know about Kenshin's true ability, can't expect her dead father, the one she hasn't known, to have survived what she knows is a definitive death. All she knows is Keith, the alien living his life in a wider universe that she meets in a place she hasn't heard about, and different from her father. I wrote these chapters 4 months ago, and I don't know if I'm biting my tongue in something, but this is the thought I had in mind
Not as tall, slimmer, black hair
WIll explain it in the next meeting. Basically, what can she tell anyone? That she is in an isolated place only she can enter, and meeting with an unknown man? What would Yae, Makoto, and god save us, Ei, think about it? Had Keith looked somewhat similar to Kenshin, or that link to have appeared in Elea's mind, another thing could be possible, but I can's imagine future when explaining that is a good thing.
far too many. The chapter he recovers his memories, is the last chapter of this arc.
Kenshin has black hair and purple eyes with that golden sparks representing his ability to see souls. Keith has purple plain eyes, dark purple hair and is a bit taller. If Elea didn't recognize him with black hair and grey eyes, she for sure won't no. But maybe when those sparks reappear, that will be enough for her to realize
Keith is different from Kenshin, his hair is purple instead of black, he is a bit taller and his eyes lack that golden sparks, that represent his ability to see souls, as it's still sleeping