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Shouldn't have said that bro
I'm liking the outcome of this
had been expecting this chapter for hours...
Too much suspense, less action.
When is the tournament beginning please... I don't wanna lose interest
This AUTHOR ain't an amateur .. how do i believe that? The flow of words, application of suspense ....
Do more of action less of dilly-dally . just like this chapter
Okay... Li Jun is unconscious ever since then, Bao-Lin Tournament at the corner, Yuxuan_ useless! Something inside of Yuxuan.... interesting
Wow! And the author just had to end the chapter like that!
This sould have been the first chapter but i understand it has sometimes to do with alternate worlds so .... okay.
This book needs working but, it's good from where you are driving at though. I just think you can do better [img=thinking]