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not dropped, delayed would be the better word, it should release by this week or next week
i'd like to think she cared about paul, just the duties of ruling distracted her and she neglected paul, and paul idolizes his father as a consequence of that. which is really catherine's fault, but this time I have changed it, you can say that its not historical but then again, this story is about a guy who gets reincarnated as paul
I'm still thinking about it, and it's spoilers if you knew. However, thank you, I was always told that writing emotional scenes was not my strong point, and I have realized that my knowledge of the time period is limited, much less Russia, the only source I knew before writing this story was extra credits, Catherine the Great. What I want to accomplish is a story as great as 'Lonely Bear and Cub'.
btw, i will not drop this story, count me on my promise(despite me not being good at keeping one) that I wont drop it, I may be lazy and slow down but I wont drop it. Another thing, do you guys prefer these longer chapters? or do I go back to 1k-2k chapters?
i know it has been a long time, but I really wanted this chapter to be good cause this is the defining moment, I didn't want to botch this chapter. if there is any advice you can give do give, this is a hobby and I want you guys to actually enjoy the story
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okay guys, I have a problem, remember when I said Elizabeth lives a year longer than usual? that's the problem, a year is long enough for russia to completely crush Frederick's prussia, and there ain't no way anybody but peter will sign the treaty of saint Petersburg, so now I have a problem, I cant justify peter signing the treaty cause if Elizabeth lives a year, prussia 100 percent loses, and no reason for peter to be couped since there isn't a treaty, so I want to edit it. Do you want the story to continue as is and the reason why russia didnt crush Frederick is he has plot armor and the Russian general completely scres up the operation, leading to a counter attack successfully by prussia, or I make Elizabeth suffer a stroke and enter a coma, but every few minutes a day she wakes up and offers advice? this would make her live for a year like now but the treaty of saint Petersburg gets signed as in real life, and it would allow paul to coup peter. The latter option requires a lot of edit but the former requires little, I'm okay with either option, and you choose the former then the chapter I releasing next is 60 percent complete, what do you think?
its hard to find a foreign princess that is a suitable age gap to Paul, so I'm thinking that perhaps I'm gonna have to make do with a germany princess of some middling nobility, which I really don't want to do as I fail to see what a some daughter of some small land who provides nothing but her blood nothing more than useless, it's a shame that the last polish king didn't have a daughter. also Im sorry to release the chapter, I was stuck on how paul can coup his father using the limited resources he has, but I got it down, it may be released as early as friday or as late as Saturday. Do give some tips or any suitable marriage prospect for Paul, the criteria is somebody who was rumored to be beautiful, graceful, and intelligent, who is also a suitable age gap(5 years difference), and if possible I wouldn't mind if she was from royalty of a big country or a country russia will interact in the future, would be funny if paul married a Chinese, like I said I don't mind their nationality as long as it isn't a minor german noble
its hard to find a foreign princess that is a suitable age gap to Paul, so I'm thinking that perhaps I'm gonna have to make do with a germany princess of some middling nobility, which I really don't want to do as I fail to see what a some daughter of some small land who provides nothing but her blood nothing more than useless, it's a shame that the last polish king didn't have a daughter. also Im sorry to release the chapter, I was stuck on how paul can coup his father using the limited resources he has, but I got it down, it may be released as early as friday or as late as Saturday. Do give some tips or any suitable marriage prospect for Paul, the criteria is somebody who was rumored to be beautiful, graceful, and intelligent, who is also a suitable age gap(5 years difference), and if possible I wouldn't mind if she was from royalty of a big country or a country russia will interact in the future, would be funny if paul married a Chinese, like I said I don't mind their nationality as long as it isn't a minor german noble.