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Le0_05 months agoRépondu à RayanghostCan you elaborate? Kolussos has the skill [sage], that is the precursor to rimuru's [great sage]. It's not conscious and can't speak to the user like [great sage] can.
- Le0_05 months agoRépondu à Rayanghost
I believe I described her in the first chapter. I have tried generating AI images of her, but because of her unique features, like the single eye, the AI doesnt generate her correctly. Thank you ao much for reading and engaging with my story.
- Le0_05 months agoRépondu à Rayanghost
From the 4th chapter forward, all chapters will have short paragraphs. I might rewrite the first 3 ones in the future. Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion.
- Le0_06 months agoCommenté
Image not necessarily 100% according to the story.
- Le0_06 months agoCommenté
Image not necessarily 100% according to the story.
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- Le0_06 months agoRépondu à Vedora_Tempest
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Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Le0_06 months agoRépondu à Vedora_Tempest
I've been reading fanfiction for a while, and I've noticed that, indeed, FF authors tend to write in very short sentences. While I haven't read actual normal books recently, I remember that they use longer paragraphs like I did in this story. Is this simply a stylistic choice, does it actually bother the reader, or am I wrong about the longer paragraph books? Thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate all criticism.
