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Magician_webnovel

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An author of a light novel called “Master of The Great Ball”.

2023-04-14 JointGlobal
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
    Répondu à Homelander69

    If you are asking wether the spell is coming from an Indian movie or not, then yes you are right

    A golden magical circle appeared on number six's chest, and it began to shine as he chanted audible incantations. "Savi...Dina...Kata...Ba...Baho...Bally..." The louder he spoke, the brighter the golden light shone until it covered his entire body and obscured the king's face.
    Master Of The Great Ball
    Fantaisie · Magician_webnovel
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
    Répondu à Homelander69

    Not Indian 😂 but everyone watches Indian movies now right! Personally it’s my favourite.

    A golden magical circle appeared on number six's chest, and it began to shine as he chanted audible incantations. "Savi...Dina...Kata...Ba...Baho...Bally..." The louder he spoke, the brighter the golden light shone until it covered his entire body and obscured the king's face.
    Master Of The Great Ball
    Fantaisie · Magician_webnovel
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    It is kinda interesting actually how that author introduced the two main character in the first two chapters , having a wonderful interaction for a first meeting. You should continue writing, this can be a good novel

    My Grim Reaper
    Fantaisie · alsofnris
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    This is one of my favorite books, the author really did a great job when he wrote it, I just hope I close my eyes then open them and find it became completed so that I read it to the end , I am eager to know more about his previous lives, the future events in the novel, really excited and really can’t wait for it. . . . . . Can anyone read my novel and give me his opinion!!

    Cultivation Online
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · MyLittleBrother
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    Oh woow , that’s good , author you nailed it , a great start by the way , absolutely loved it , and I'm excited to know how it will continue

    TILL I DIE IVY
    Urbain · Jovialjune
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
    Commenté

    Great start

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Deadly desires
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    Urbain · Rainandstorm
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    I think you care a lot about this novel , that’s good , good book, keep up the great work, good luck with your work. loved it, ....Best Wishes

    Absolute Ability
    Fantaisie · alu_sachi
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    Woow , that was strong and tense beginning, really liked it when she hit him in the face , really convenient. This was good, I don’t have anything to add except for wishing you good luck

    Love Blossoms on Cruises
    Urbain · Augustdsuza
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
    Répondu à Paul_Okito

    Yeah it was nice , you know I was always seeking for a novel where MC looses everything at the beginning and then left alone in the world with a hard past and no weaknesses.

    The Nascent Bloodline
    Romance · Paul_Okito
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    Interesting , I loved the way she reacted over her transmigration. I always find novel where mc accepts it like nothing very unlogic. You did a great work building your main character, hopefully your novel is going to be a big hit, don’t forget us when that happens “ ha ha ha “ just kidding with you. Keep it up , don’t stop , your novel is great.

    I'm the Terminally ill Novel's Extra
    Fantaisie · Dao_lord_
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    You made it a tragedy from the beginning, his mom , sad what happened, but I loved how your story a world based on high technology. Keep it up , it’s awesome

    The Nascent Bloodline
    Romance · Paul_Okito
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    I think you need to care more about the world background, but yeah it is a good novel, loved the fight scene with the wolf monster, keep it up

    Blood, Wolves, and Death
    Fantaisie · Violet_Ivory
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    I read a few chapters , it is good , with unusual MC , I loved how he responded to situations. Author , I think you need to check your synopsis.

    Consume the light
    Fantaisie · goffyboy
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  • Magician_webnovel
    Magician_webnovel1yr
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    Hey 👋 Hope you all enjoy this book. 🔥 There will be 2 chapters a day from now on, until another announcement. Please give your honest review of this novel, but I am sure you will like it. Give it at least 10 to 20 chapters before you decide is it worth reading or not. Bye 👋

    Master Of The Great Ball
    Fantaisie · Magician_webnovel
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