nimko

i have read up to 20 chapters so far so good

that is good , most similar novels have romance and it's annoying ... so i think it's good to have an MC dedicated to his goals only ..

i disagree, we have many football novels without systems and they are just boring ... what can an mc do just by himself huh? if you talk about being realistic then most players need soo many years just to improve slowly from childhood ... so in that case you have to add other aspects to the novel to keep it interesting, like romance or other stuff, wich at that point football becomes secondary .

sorry its a good novel and enjoyed it at first ...but the ntr just ruined everything no sane person would let his women have sex with other men ... cuck mc .

it was a 5 star novel in first but now it gets worst because the author keeps waisting time explaing every detail for so many chapters . It feels like the story stopped moving, also the mc is a beta submissive to women he gets insulted in his face every time he just does nothing ... so yeah i dropped it .

why give it 1 star if you didn't read it ?

well I will try to be honest here. the first thing i will say is this is a good story overall , so please don't let my review stop you from reading it . however what annoys me is that the characters in this novel feel like they have below average IQ including the MC wich is very stupid for a guy from modern earth ... like for example in the beginning he is not careful when he clearly knows that there are people (and he knows exactly who) that killed his body's owner and he is in danger yet he does nothing just does his thing and ofc his plot armor is thick so he gets away for it ... and then proceeds to make new inventions from earth knowing he is going to get all eyes on him ... and the worst thing is he gives the method of making trebuchets for some noble that he doesn't know for a useless and annoying woman and some random island or something wich that noble proceeds to sends that method for his ennemies and gets attacked by it later ... i mean if this is not stupid then idk what is . This MC compared to the MC in herald of steel and other similar novels has no strategy or cunningness . but other than that this is a good novel you should try it if you like this kind of mc .

the idea and the beginning was very good but sadly i dropped it at chapter 5 because the mc is just plain stupid... he literally used his cheat limited points from the system to make others friends and ennemies stronger?? like why just why.. who in their mind wouldn't use those points to make themselves even stronger? or maybe wish to have more unique abilities. hell probably he could have wished with them to have passage to other worlds maybe anyway i just can't stand MC's that help others with no reason when he doesn't even know them ffs he is not even born he started giving free stuff for other's, i can't even imagine when he gets born what he would do. so yeah if you like this kind of MC i guess you will like it bye

hello there , this is the author, please keep in mind this is my first time writing and only doing it here to gain experience so if you see mistakes tell me i will fix them . so please don't be harsh on me 🥺. Also keep in mind this story is very fast paced . other than that enjoy reading

thanks. yes i know it is a fast paced story because this is just the beginning and i didn't want to waste much time in it .