TheHarvinator01

Weren't we just told that they are jealous of MC because they can't do this with Igni yet?

? Why, it's clearly worth a ton. He hasn't used identify on it either.

You form better sentences to critics than in your own Fic.

You're acting like a child lmao. You're just gunna delete this review anyway like the other guy who gave you 2 stars and constructive criticism. Whom you also just called a cuck as your only response. Guess your comebacks are like your story, basic and boring.

Also not ntr, I don't read that shit but I'd rather shovel through that horrid stuff than read your shit. Puts Chinese cultivation novels to shame. Almost had an aneurism reading this.

That's the shit authors response to critics 101

Read Arcane Anew by Drunken_Sailor822 which I just found the other day. You can get some inspiration & understanding on writing from a new Author.

Honestly if you're above the age of 14 I'd be surprised. Cuz the writing just seems childish

? NTR is disgusting tf you on about. Write better

Wish fulfilment and logic is thrown out the window. It's written like dora the explorer, every paragraph ends in a question to the readers ffs. Constant cliffhangers and short chapters.