Obli790

Só sei quem é Menino Ney.

Opa, tudo bom? Eu só quis dar uma crítica á altura para essa bela obra, Ganoel Mones certamente aprovaria.

It's still excellent, I just hope that more of these dynamics can happen between actors and scenes from the films/series. Furthermore, it would be good for the MC to discover the immersion in various types of performances that he could do.

Perfeição, era isto que eu estava á procurar. Quero mais capítulos, essa obra precisa de investimento de outros leitores. Pessoal, salpiquem powerstones aqui. Morderrr 😁

It has excellent quality. Of course it's a cliché, but a well-done cliché can warm any reader's heart. I hope this work has more chapters and character development.

So far this fanfic can be considered "almost perfect". This is due to the quality of the script and how this league of universes can be built.

I'm going to give it five stars, because I like the fanfic, I think it's really cool that the story told in the fanfic is several years before Naruto was born.

It's okay, I can live with this.

Very good, this story should be published with stability. I don't want to have to wait for the launch, that would be too boring for me. what I want you to make me feel like a comic book teenager

Well, this fan-fiction has a lot of potential. If the author maintain regularity, and post chapters whenever possible. I would not doubt if this fanfic became very famous