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Nice story. Fun read so far, love the premise. I love even more the idea of these silly daughters dancing doing a funny little butt wiggle to communicate food locations. I hope the writing continues to improve and that the story is more and more cute bee daughters fun dance time.[img=update]
okay I've not read anymore since this last comment but it suddenly said completed and I had to read the first couple sentences that the last chapter lets me read without paying money. "intergalactic space ship???" what the hell happened in the 40chapters i didn't read? he was bodyguarding some stupid soldier last I saw and in 40 chaps it's outer space? thank God if this train has come to a stop guys honestly it's like watching a train derailment except without all the fun parts. the only victims here are me, my wallet and the hours I can never get back.
wait I'm confused. assassins? it's been a while and I've read a bunch of other novels in between chapters of this novel. where did they come from?
How I miss thee. You were the best and i never found another as good as you, i probably never will. Months since you've been gone and still no word, pls don't let it end on a chapter that says "Part 1" we deserve more than this. the characters deserve more than this, I hope the author is well because life doesn't have happy endings but we can only hope this story many continue one day.
Ive read 378 chapters. not worth it. what's the point of introducing Scarlett when you aren't even gonna have her and idiot bodyguard get together at this point. better have her show back up in 20 chapters to show her living a sad life without the guy she is in love with because of... wait let me check... "reasons". did you write the story while thinking of a girl in your personal life then she rejected you and now the character of Scarlett just has to be a sad existence. honestly who cares about this world you've built for your story, it's boring and the girl deserves to be happy but at this point why even bother ever reading further.
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