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The story is good, and i kind of like this kind of story, but the uploads are too lengthy, and considering the time it takes to upload, the contents are lacking. So I am hoping that the author should at least increase the contents, it's kind of a let down, after waiting for a week.

you made a mistake author, these things should belong to lia.

thank god, i wasn't reading in audio mode,

now there is a pink hulk, really what type of bloodline ability are there,

Am i reading a fantasy novel or a modern warfare crossover?

oh then I am looking forward to it

I haven't said anything like this before, because i just ignored everything, but bro this, at least try to create a unique plotline, i can see a mixture of Authors'POV, I will kill the author, and survive as an extra. I usually don't like to hate, because my mind is built like that, but please, reading this feels like i am forgetting everything I read in those books. This book is in its earlier stages, so you have a chance to change the future plot, please consider my opinion, as a fellow reader.

thankyou

well why do I feel like i heard of this diablo named skeleton somewhere? 🤔

I am thinking about it, as you know my previous drafts were gone, and Along with my axillaries, so i have to write them from the beginning. 😔Well looks like i have to get to work.

Oh now that i think back, there is another being beside them. Who is just quietly looking at them fight.

What?, i thought i fixed that, well thanks for letting me know

me neither lol 😂

Well i don't have much to say, but this story is similar to a book I read when I was just a beginner, it was called The ancient genes, well i truly liked that novel, but after a couple of chapters the story became something which most of the people don't like, yes spiller alert, it turned into a Harem, so i dropped it, and never looked back. But after some research I can't seem to find an alternative, when a year later, I came across this. well from the first few chapters I was hooked, it has a great story and well character development. I just have one thing to say, Keep on it author you are doing great. I can't wait to read the next chapters. And sorry for my grammar mistakes, English is not my first language, and I am too bad at it.

I will gladly take responsibility. I am very glad to have a helpful reader like you. I am also making a discord, for any complaints, i wrote this story when I had nothing to do, and at that time I was a little amateur at writing novels. And as for the grammar and spelling mistakes, well i am trying to correct as much as possible. I live in West Bengal, where not even Hindi is renowned, and as far as i know i wasn't a bright student when it comes to English, but I am still trying. So if you can please forgive me 🥹.

It's just a concept which i later decided to leave as it is, at that time I was having a hard time deciding the names so I left them blank for now

No, you can just say that he only passed his highschool, and is about to enter college

well it's just how i talk