Huh, he seems stronger than his regular version, interesting.

Wow, he is weak as hell, probably Grade 3 at best. Kind of sad since he is from Dark Soul as the chosen undead as well but oh well, guess he lost most of his powers.

That's not how the word is used. It's supposed to be 'commit suicide'.

God I always loved that line.

There aren't enough for me to judge yet. But it’s decent so far.

Or down in his ideals and die. -Emiya probably

Pretty sure having fun, and throwing away vital information to people that would use him is different.

Shinji forgets Fate is an eroge.

This guy is such a simp, did that Gladiator arc not change him? He suddenly went back to his old self.

She aint a Magus, more of a Druid.

Alya is not going to be happy with that, like at all.

Nice, keep it up.

This is why most fanfiction readers have trust issues.

What's Mango boy is gonna do? Invade his omniversal restaurant while Serie is there and she will use one of her purification spell and erase him from existence.

True, especially having to move around to various timelines.

Uhhh, not really...

Oh, wow, what a suprise that another author uses this same trait as her character motivation, how original. Guess Scathach is nothing more than a suicidal teacher no matter the circumstances to most people.

I mean, it is called fanfiction.

This is much more readable than the last chapter, makes your writing more comprehensive, make sure to use some grammar checker to go through the document again after writing it, it'll help get rid of most of the typos.

Then is super high like Sukuna and Maki post awakening?