SoftBreezeWasTaken

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no need to put out after dripping

it's streamed and cheek, chick is like a baby chicken

amazing story, fascinating with absolutely splendid writing. I have been looking for a book like this for so long, please never stop writing. keep going dude amazing stuff :)

very interesting story nice writing i like the characters overall very nice story. keep it up!

loved the story dude. the feeling that this story is something so big is just a yes from me, and your writing is pretty good I loved it keep going my man!

thank you! I'll keep improving on my Grammer and writing :)

not much to say tbh great story great characters and the writing omg I feel like I need to learn writing from you keep up the good work!

Pretty good work keep it up my man. I loved the first chapter, had a little challange understanding some bits here and there so I have you a 4 out of 5 in writing but overall I loved it. the story development was very good the character designs are good I liked the way you portrayed characters and overall it was a good story for me loved it!

it's fine:)