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"goal" instead of "way" wouldve went hard here.
pure power fantasy. no story involved so far.
is there going to be a story of any kind? or will there just be upgrades, and lengthy descriptions of their effects?
might be a good idea to increase the pace of the story. over a hundred chapters and almost nothing has happened that we didn't already know was going to occur.
his name was wuji though...
hes already learned this information...
great story. power system seems kinda backwards given the sheer number of attributes being plundered. the biggest problem though are the terrible lewd scenes. worst I've ever read hands down. not even a single one is good.
your smit scene should be marked in the chapter title in some way so people can skip. you make it seem like one of the worst activities 2 people can do. should be enjoyed not endured.
now he just needs a sentient fork to merge the spoon with to create the ultimate dining tool... the spork.