The author is good... Illustrations of the cast are always welcome, especially when we have a mommy like this.

how the hell are you gonna join another family when you already have a falna....

the master is good

it's time to make your own history

Do you seriously have a grudge against Arthuria? Why are you doing this to her? Hasn't she suffered enough? Can't you finally give her some love?

but how the hell did he register in a guild ? to be an adventurer you have to be in a family and have a falna.... Scáthach is not a god and can't have a family... In the end he would not be able to register in the guild in any way.

because that's not Kratos' behavior.

I really can't imagine how you're going to get out of this situation.... Rewrite the identities of at least two characters that have already been confirmed..... Well I'll be watching for further developments on how you decide to handle this...

But that's not right... Look at it this way, Tsubasa was born here and lived in this world, she has her own memories, she has her own personality and she never knew she had amnesia. And if you bring back Nix's memory in the future, we will lose Tsubasa's identity... and if we don't, it will be a split personality and we shouldn't forget that she has her mother in her head as well.... Akwa is fine because he was born with all his memories and his personality is already established. But what you've started doing to his wives... you made life difficult for yourselves ( with their rebirths and sealed memories, if you wanted to do that, you should not have sealed their memories and done the same with Akva so that they would remember everything at once ) in my opinion you should have done the same with Galaxar or they would have come here themselves or he would have followed them... and so we got into a very unpleasant situation.

This fanfic was very good, but after rewriting it became a masterpiece. Also, the author doesn't forget to post illustrations of characters and places. I will recommend all my friends to read this fanfic.

normal form

let's be honest he was an idiot, everyone knows what a god with the name Loki represents, everyone would think about the deception and run away, but no our gg why believes and immediately decides to join the family.... Zero logic ...

Why insult your readers like that ? if you saw any insult in my comments I apologize .... but you shouldn't just insult someone for no reason.

Again, this is fanfic

ha dude you said yourself that this is a fanfic on such small things will not pay attention to such small things and moreover in the dna chain a lot of genetic memory and even in our time there will not necessarily be children with exactly the same hair as the parents just the chance that they will be the same is high that's all ...

I apologize my English is not very good and I may have made mistakes in my previous comment ...if of course you referred to it so here I am saying that you are running ahead no one told you to do it now you are in too much of a hurry .... to give them children you really need to slap Danzo, Payne first...Obito won't go after Konoha himself until he resurrects Madara, and the way you are training your GG, when that happens slapping Madara won't be a problem. Basically you really need to get rid of Danzo and Paine.