Nice work man, hope to see more of this very soon man. the grammar is great and the writing style is good, but try to post more often bro, good luck

This made my day. Thank you!

True.

I can't say that, but I can tell you that its going to be 2 of them throughout the story, an OC and a CC. If I feel like this doesn't fit the story then I am only keeping the OC. PS: This OC wasn't introduced to the story up until now (Chapter 9).

Yes, but not too soon.

I am glad you liked it :)

Shameless author here, giving myself a reviews kek. I think that my grammar is ok, and the interactions need a lot of improvement, this is like my second language so pls don't crucify me too much lol.

I hear you, I will continue, for sure.

no

Thank you for the comment. I struggle a lot to create dialogues and I had to take a break to really think about what I really want to achieve with this fanfic. Also, Don't worry as I have already written a rough idea of the process of this story until the end.