Ret_Tri

He knows that people on earth would panic less but he isn’t really a smart one himself. Scanning others & then shocking himself & driving himself into a depression with all that “his heart became heavy“… I hope he matures faster.

In my Top 3 ever read books. MC is smart, doesn't get shocked at everything he didn't know yet. FLs have good written out characters. No need for face-slapping stuff etc. Would have had potential for more story, which is why I'm deducting 1 star there, but the ending is fine as well.

So... I reached the chapter where the trial ends for their 1st return to earth. I like the setting etc. but... The MC is just a nut case. He over-analyses EVERYTHING. Like his way of questioning every single detail is honestly bordering on insanity. If he looses control of the situation he gets mental. There has to be a description of people with a disorder like him. Then his way of acting towards his ex... You haven't seen her in 10 years, but drops the best way to advance so he can take decisions "for her" that he later admits were stupid. Every chapter having 20 questions asked just doesn't make the story better or more fun to read. I don't mind him reasoning things etc. but the amount of it here is just beyond any healthy dosage by light-years. Dropping it.

Good Story in theory. Especially like his quick acceptance & embrace of the new world. None of this "How do i get back to earth" garbage. But holy hell... 1. Too much repetition of text -> Whole paragraphs either paraphrased or copy pasted. 2. Too many flowery exchanges. Like I get Respect etc. but that's just rather excessively applied in this story. 3. The MC... The Dungeon Guardian explains how it works. Then at every!!! Trial he asks himself if the voice is the Master of the Dungeon. Like that's not good storytelling, that's just stretching the word count to infinity. 4. The amount of "Could it be..." etc is baffeling as well 5. Sees the FL in person. Asks himself where he heard the name before.. Like Seriously ?? Btw Answer would be less then a month ago. Story has potential but the way of writing is just so bad.

It's so good to see a novel where the transmigrator simply accepts that he will never return to earth. Simply refreshing not to have to read 2 chapters worth of "oh is my sister going to be ok etc.".

I will never understand the point of including obviously dumb decisions by the MC. The Guy who recognizes his aura gets told to stfu. In the presence of Rank 4s he decides ... to run. Simply brain-dead. It adds nothing to his character nor does it make the story better in any way. Iris could have been introduced differently.