LimitlessEvil
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LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à hero4hireyes, yes i am. i write thousands of words a day. every chapter is a combination of thousands of words interchanged, rough drafts etc. i’m not perfect bro i cant make one mistake without getting 💩for it? Well sorry that I made a mistake, I apologiz e
[Gene(s): {Increased Muscle Strength}, {Increased Muscle Growth}, {Enhanced Sense of Smell}, {Low-Level Poison Resistance}, {Echolocation}, {Low-Level Pain Resistance}- LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à Tenzing_Choeying_5139
I mean, not really. I have work after school most days so it’s like, I can push out chaps at the price of stressing myself even further. But I do apologize to you all as my readers. But I have a lot on my load, I’l try to do better but i’m only human.
Ch 29 Home At Last? - LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à hero4hire
- LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à Prakhartheturtle
yeah
[Gene(s): {Increased Muscle Strength}, {Increased Muscle Growth}, {Enhanced Sense of Smell}, {Low-Level Poison Resistance}, {Low-Level Pain Resistance}. {LIMITLESS} - LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à Tenzing_Choeying_5139
are you enjoying the story so far? any complaints? anything you feel as though I need to improve on? all criticism is welcomed.
As the shadows danced across the room, Ash couldn't help but feel a twinge of longing for something he had never truly experienced: the warmth of genuine connection and the embrace of familial love. - LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch -2 Information!
- LimitlessEvil9mthRépondu à Ahmad_IchrerCh 29 Home At Last?
- LimitlessEvil10mthRépondu à CruelRealityCh 28 Author Note:
- LimitlessEvil10mthRépondu à LvecCh 7 Reality Check...
- LimitlessEvil10mthRépondu à ImaginationGalaxy
This is HxH world Post-partum Nen users don’ rot that fast
Flying a good distance, Ash approached Azrael's lifeless body, gently closing his eyes as a sign of respect. - LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à 0dinson
Hehe
8 - The user's mental state will become twisted, having no care for other's feelings. Only caring for his goals. This condition is irreversible, having no fix for it. The user will remain normal only losing the ability to care for others. - LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à Overwrit
But, he doesn't have ABSOLUTE muscle control. It's enhanced allowing him to do things otherwise impossibly by regular people such as constrict blood flow with his insane muscle control. My goal isn't to make him braindead OP quickly, I want to have him GROW not uhoh I just discovered how to manipulate REALITY! now im the strongest: story end.
"No, it doesn't matter it's just an arm. Either way, I still have my right one." Said Ash, not being put off by the loss of his left arm. - LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à Daoist007536Ch 23 Reflectance of Self...
- LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à Overwrit
it’s too low leveled of a gene to be able to detach the muscles, he has muscle control not fully body control, he would have to retach nerve endings etc. i can go deeper but this will have to much human biology for a comment
"No, it doesn't matter it's just an arm. Either way, I still have my right one." Said Ash, not being put off by the loss of his left arm. - LimitlessEvil11mthPosté
Author here, I want to say. This will not be receiving a shameless 5 star review from me, It's not up to my standards. Although, I do try to deliver the best quality possible and make sure my grammar is always up to par. The dialogue, story telling and world building are sitting at a solid 3.8 for me. That's my personal opinion, I convey characteristics through their words instead of their actions a tad bit too much and I'm slowly but surely fixing this habit. I hope you all can stay with me on my journey to finishing this story and see the improvements as an author I go through. Happy reading!
- LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à Professor_LightCh 23 Reflectance of Self...
- LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à Professor_LightCh 23 Reflectance of Self...
- LimitlessEvil11mthRépondu à morningstar_8465Ch 22 All-Consuming Hatred!