shivam_Jha

thx

The idea is good but story development was rushed with no caracter development. It is a wish full filment FF that could have been better. Still thanks for writing the fic.

another one where author doesn't know the timeline and just put any year.

kakashi was born in konoha yr 50-51 so that he is 30 yr old for hookage position post war yr 81-82.

great story. it's development is also good till now. keep up the good work and don't drop in the middle.

does "ho oh" does not come under phoenix.

thx for continuation of the fix even if it is not updated regularly

typical Chinese novel being copy pasted. it is not even translated properly for readers.

The story is really good and has lots of potential.

welcome Back.