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Aidan_Greya year ago
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bro how many words are in there it felt like 5k or more
Ch 2 Chapter 1: Unveiled Omens, The Arrival
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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huh
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Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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for the first chapter it was good
Ch 1 Prologue : The Veil of Destiny
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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i gotta say it was impressive word choice you got there
Little do they know that their interwined paths will shake the foundations of the world, awakening dormant powers and heralding a new era. In a realm where gods are worshipped and mortal tremble, Lucias and Nathan stand poised to weave their own legends, destined to shape the tapestry of their interwind fates. The prologue begins, and the stage is set for a tale of grandeur, mystery, and the clash of worlds.
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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wow
In the land of shadow and secrets, where the veil between realms is thin, a tale begins. It is a story woven in the threads of destiny, where the fates of mortals and the whims of gods entwine. Amidst the enigmatic dance of lights and darkness, a young soul awakens to a world of mysteries.
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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My thoughts:- you explained what the characters are way to soon although you leave the important things hidden it is just that early character reveal is a big thing make sure you don't do it for the next
Ch -1 Character Detailed (Base)
Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
Fantaisie · 1001001sh
Aidan_Greya year ago
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good start well balanced and detailed
Ch 1 Chapter 01: Death
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantaisie · Sam_OverPowered
Aidan_Greya year ago
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maybe
"Kill me?" Sam frowned. "You, Julian? The guy who's scared shitless to even go to the principal's office wants to kill me? Did you hit your head or something?"
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantaisie · Sam_OverPowered
Aidan_Greya year ago
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cause you killed his people man
"Revenge for what, exactly?" As far as Sam could recall, he hadn't done anything to provoke this guy's anger, other than inadvertently making him extremely jealous.
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantaisie · Sam_OverPowered
Aidan_Greya year ago
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since when a car starts to hum
As he ventured deeper into the shadowy alley, his senses perked up to an unusual hush that enveloped the surroundings. The only discernible sounds were the distant hum of passing vehicles.
The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
Fantaisie · Sam_OverPowered

The Chronicles of the Eldritch War

Lloyd Rash has always felt like an outsider in a world where magical abilities are commonplace. While his friends and classmates discover their magical powers, Lloyd remains stubbornly, frustratingly normal. However, when strange occurrences begin to happen in the city, Lloyd can't help but wonder if there is more to the world than he has ever imagined.

Aidan_Grey · Fantaisie

4.5

14 Chs

Nightshade of Unveiled

In a world where reality blurs with the supernatural, Kael, a weary construction worker, finds himself haunted by an enigmatic dream that challenges the limits of his perception. As he grapples with the fine line between reality and imagination, Kael's life takes an unexpected turn when a mysterious figure emerges from the shadows, offering glimpses of a realm that exists beyond the known. Drawn into a hidden world of magic and intrigue, Kael discovers that the dream was just the beginning – a glimpse into his latent connection to the Veil of Shadows, a dimension interwoven with both light and darkness. As he navigates this enigmatic realm, Kael encounters a cast of characters with unique powers, each grappling with their own inner demons and secrets. As the barriers between reality and the supernatural begin to crumble, Kael must come to terms with his newfound abilities and the responsibilities they entail. With the guidance of unlikely allies and the ever-present threat of malevolent forces, he embarks on a journey to unlock the mysteries of the Veil and unravel the truth behind his existence.

Aidan_Grey · Urbain

4.8