DAO_OF_DRAGON
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Literally bored of life😑
2023-01-02 JointGlobal
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DAO_OF_DRAGON3mthPosté- DAO_OF_DRAGON3mthRépondu à Ancient_One_4295Ch 3 The cave of cheat
- DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthRépondu à jesus_Orellana[Although I'm impressed by your feelings but sorry to break you but I'm not into mens, and I'm a straight guy...]
- DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthRépondu à Daoist971076"April 2nd, 2021. The cause of death: destroyed lungs and heart. Patient name… Breeze." He muttered in a heavy tone as he put down his notebook, "I hope your wish comes true."
- DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthRépondu à Karma1kittyHeey reader(s). Not sure if anyone is following this story. But if you are, I can use some help. So I'm trying to decide which POV to use in the future chapters.
- DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthCommentéYet, one should question, if merely killing one's enemies is wrong, what about those protagonists who trample over others as though they are mere bugs in their gallant paths? The world lauds their actions as heroic.
- DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthCommenté
1st peson pov is better
Heey reader(s). Not sure if anyone is following this story. But if you are, I can use some help. So I'm trying to decide which POV to use in the future chapters. - DAO_OF_DRAGON4mthCommenté
Pacing is good.👍
Also, I would love to know if my pacing is okay or it could use some improvement. This is my first cultivation novel if I'm being honest. Sure I've read and watched them, but actually writing one is different. Which is why some feedback is much needed. You don't need to review the book yet, just leave the feedback down in the comments. TIA - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté"Harem?! That's just a glorified word for cheating, and no, I don't want to go around collecting beauties. In every novel I've read, a harem only brings more troubles for the protagonist to deal with. So, no, I'm not building a harem."
- DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthRépondu à Iron_Man_3000"Harem?! That's just a glorified word for cheating, and no, I don't want to go around collecting beauties. In every novel I've read, a harem only brings more troubles for the protagonist to deal with. So, no, I'm not building a harem."
- DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthRépondu à crepskul"Not to boast, but I'm a badass, system, so it won't be hard," Michael confidently declared, expecting a response from the system. However, none came.
- DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté
WUT
'Two months? Fuck, in two months, you and Laura might even have a baby!' - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté
Goku has 4th dimensional power and saitama has 3rd dimensional power. Even if saitama had infinite strength, he would still get one shot by goku🤷.
Travis always enjoyed reading this story. From the day he started reading manga It was one lf the shows he was greeted to. He never really cared about the Goku VS Saitama debates people had since he knew who won the fight already and that is Goku. He also loved how beautifully drawn it was. One could say it was breathetaking. - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthRépondu à
They are literally in the same school.
"No problem, I also saw him faint earlier. Just tell him to get a lot of rest. I'm a bit busy today, so I'll leave first," Long Tian replied. - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthRépondu à Pixxl_In reality though, this wasn't all that special. It was rumoured that when a martial artist's strength exceeded five thousand kilograms, they would be able to shatter the earth at will. At that point, a normal leaf could become a flying dagger used to kill while a droplet of water could be used as a cannonball with a might that could rend a city in two. That was the true power of the martial path.
- DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté
Indeed I have cummed
"You've come." - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté"It's exactly what I mean." His voice was deep and husky, and his eyes were dark as if inviting her to look deep within. "From now on, you'll listen to me, follow my order, and never betray me. I own all of you—your body, your mind, and your heart. Do you understand?"
- DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté
How MC be feeling like.
"Yes." Song Xi answered and pulled out a piece of paper from her pocket, handing it to Qian Quan. "Qian Quan, this is the note you left in my yearbook. I felt... it wasn't quite appropriate. So today, I'm returning it to you." - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthRépondu à DAO_OF_DRAGON
Sorry I meant Middle-Upper class.
Afterall they belonged to a middle class family. And lower middle class family to be more precise. The money his parents earnt were barely enough to cover the rent and groceries. - DAO_OF_DRAGON5mthCommenté
Than you aren’t middle class?? I belong from upper-middle class family and Our situation is wayyyy better.
Afterall they belonged to a middle class family. And lower middle class family to be more precise. The money his parents earnt were barely enough to cover the rent and groceries.