WSmith17

So excited to be moving on.

Yes, final fight. The training and character development is nice, but there are only so many chapters of a single training fight before I'm looking forward to seeing the story move forward.

So good. I love that all the story arcs and plot lines get such satisfying conclusions. I wish I could point this out to other authors and be like, "see, THIS, is how you end an arc."

Ugh, need those next chapters! It's so good!

That's right Bee, time for a little revenge. You should definitely get in on that. Lots of rewards to be had.

Interesting to see a question failed for once. I like the MC to be able to handle anything, but some things are out of their control and I find that refreshing. Looking forward to how this plays out.

ooohhh. it's so good right now. I need more chapters!

Death Note spirit base, nice.

You don't need to show it or be explicit about it, but the MC also doesn't need to be a loser that can't get his manhood up. I mean, at this point, there are no men who wouldn't take care of the angel chick. The author has to force him to not have a libido. it actually makes the story harder to read and breaks the immersion because it's such unrealistic behavior.

what ever happened to fatty the bird? Did it just get written out of the story or did I miss something?