PicatrixPuff
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Writer and Creator of imaginary worlds. I write about chaos. Do you want to be friends of chaos?
2022-12-18 JointEuropean Union
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PicatrixPuff1yrRépondu à VertiKalElCh 6 Feelings or Safety?- PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 4 Chapter 4 - The turning point
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Corruption everywhere hahha
This was the letter he received after his grandfather pulled the strings to get him enrolled, he still couldn't forget the joyous expressions of his parents when that happened. - PicatrixPuff1yrCommenté
Looks like a real man in my head 🤣
His muscular physique inspired imperial authority and majesty, yet his casual attire gave a very contrasting feeling. - PicatrixPuff1yrCommenté
This is just gross🤣🤣
Mould and fungus grew and spread in the damp areas of the bathroom. Cockroaches and other small insects moved frantically in and out of holes in the walls. - PicatrixPuff1yrCommenté
Feels like dorms in UK😂😂
It was a small, confined space with barely enough room to fit a twin-sized bed, a desk and a dresser. Everything is crammed together, and Cagnus finds it challenging to move around. - PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 18 Night Hawks history (2) & The Watchers (1)
- PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 17 His past (3) & Night Hawks history – Alexis POV (3)
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Purrr.... Alexis is one of the very best... Ohhh sooo nicee
The fact that Alexis did the most dangerous part of the missions himself often build him a lot of prestige in the army and made him quickly accumulate merit. It also was the reason why Alexis was the youngest person yet to be applying for the Night Hawks, at just 18 years old. Most people could only apply to the Night Hawks at 21, because only then would they have built enough prestige and merit to qualify for application. Of course, just merit and prestige weren't enough, to join the Nigh Hawks, you would also need to have enough skills. - PicatrixPuff1yrRépondu à Justin_Gabventure
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The story itself it is very interesting. The development of the worldd and the transitions in your book are quite well done. The only side note that i will have to add is that you make too many author notes. Let some things for people to think and interpret will be more interactive in their minds (I guess). As for the author, you have a lot of potential so keep up with the good work.
- PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 5 Odin's Fear 2
- PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 3 Super Thief System!!!
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Really good transition in here. Good job!
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - PicatrixPuff1yrCommentéCh 1 Leo