Abel_Black

The story is amazing. The writing style is simple yet enjoyable. Really good job

nice story. loved the characters, especially Zina. Good luck

The story is good. The character's are likeable. But my one problem is the name selection. The title 'Maid's secret' is kinda overused and I probably saw similar titles. It is something that make good books getting lost among others. Other than that, not bad.

Loving the story a lot. Loved the pace of the story. I loved the character design the most. It's been a while since I read such a story. Really enjoyed every second of reading it. Hats off

An amazing story, loved the pace. Would love to read ut again in the future. Hats off

Good story. Kinda surprised to see only this much views. The chapters would be be better if expressed more in fewer words. For instance, 700 to 750 words are better. Overall, not bad.

I promise you that

thanks a lot. the story will only get better and better.

He says 'what' a lot of times XD

Love the story so far. Read upto the 6th chapter. But I would suggest to keep the chapters a little shorter so that the audience can wait and wonder what shall happen next. Other than that, a great story.