Miracle_invoker_

We already know the story of one piece, what's the point of making a fan fiction if it's to follow Luffy. Might as well make it a new adventure

Hum

Is this the ritual for sequence 4 of the fool???

Un galaxie impact ou divide ne serai pas de refus 😗

Because they still do not have their fleet and ally who made them so feared in the new world to such an extent that the navy does not make their way there. And everything is still too unbalanced, the mode of the new world is not stable at all. Any of its powers would easily be annihilated by the navy if they make too many waves. C’est une traduction

Also Nami

Ahhhh it doesn't look human at all this writing, try to write without the IA even if it's hard. This is the only way you will improve and make the most demanding reader want to at least try the story. Because with this kind of synopsis, I already know what to expect. Even if the script itself is good, if the quality of writing is not even done by a human it will never make you want to.

Pourquoi y’a t il tant de faute sur les noms des personnages ??

Not yet read and it doesn't even make me want to. The synopsis is just too long, way too long. He gives a little too much information.