Julie_Rod

The plot line is great, but most thing’s are not explained and just rushed over. In the first half of the first chapter so much is washed over there’s so much left to be explained. There is also a lot of notable grammar errors that can be fixed. Just lastly, not to be insulting or disrespectful, but the story has potential, but they are just certain things that should be explained more. I’ve only read three chapters and so many things are said in such a vague way that it’s hard to understand or put it into mind.