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people who don't want to leave a trace of what they're selling. potentially people who may have killed someone else to get the pills they have
I am calling him dumb but there is a point I guess where if he's transmigrated from a world where people don't just kill people at the drop of a hat it does seem somewhat realistic that he wouldn't immediately think that something bad was going to happen regardless of how many books he may have read or written on cultivation worlds
This is a pretty solid story. I deeply appreciate how federal it is in keeping all the plot lines together we don't have to worry about too many plots being thrown in our face which can make it difficult to keep up with the rest of the story. When the plots are resolved you can see the underlying story and conspiraciea coming together.The male lead and the female lead relationship develops naturally albeit a bit quickly ans they don't allow for miscommunication to drive them apart. I'll ignore the jealousy of the ML as he never truly lets it get in the way of the FL life and adds some humor to their interactions. The FL makes some moves that put her little too much in the spotlight considering she was reborn in a world that might label you a witch for possessing another body but it makes her seem more human that she isn't perfect at disguising herself as the original person. All in all solid story appreciate it will continue reading and would read again. Thanks to the author for formulating such a well crafted story
might have spoke too soon
well that's a relief he seems like a decent person. Don't want him to go evil on us.
hey yo chill my man you only met her like once you cannot turn to the bad side this easily
I read up to chapter like 374 and let me tell you there is a second male lead added into the story which I didn't see coming and it doesn't make sense because Even when we were in that character's head he didn't imply he was actually attracted to Aubrey. secondly they have to dumb her down so much more than she already was in order to make it possible that she misses the signs that this person is in love with her it's insane
It really did have such potential I'm reading a little farther along in a story but like all of a sudden it feels like there's a ton of bizarre plots that have been added into the story I guess to add some suspense and it just doesn't make sense either she and her family are powerful or they're not and they keep on like hiding stuff from grown ass people for reasons I'm not sure of Like Charlotte got hurt and they're hiding who hurt her does that make sense
Yeah... no. at first I wasn't going to respond and then I realized something you replied to only two negative opinions on this entire review page with an accusation of them not reading the story. But then I went and checked the earliest reviews four and five months ago. I didn't see you complaining or making any comment about anyone not reading a story when the comments are praising the story, when they've only read 1 chapter, 11 chapters, 15 chapters,and 22 chapters or when they commented 5 months ago when you only had about six chapters out according to the site. It's okay if you don't like negative comments but it is absolutely hypocritical for you to make your attack of choice that the commenter didn't read the book to discredit them. That only matters to you when the comment isn't praising your story. You're telling us not to leave negative comments just because a book isn't to our taste but comments like ours are here for people who might like this type of story plot. There are a lot of stories on here and not as much time as people might want to read them. If I had come across your book and had come across a comment like ron1n's or mine I wouldn't have read the story because it's not my style and then you wouldn't have had my negative comment on here. None of the other reviews on here tell me anything beyond the most generic vague praises about how good the book is and that true love conquers all and how romantic or strong willed the leads are. Those reviews don't help me figure out if this book is going to be something I won't regret reading. So I have to go and read the first 26-40 chapters trying to get an idea of what the story is and if there's not enough information there then I cannot spend coins on 100 chapters and hope that the rest of the book will convince me to like it.
especially considering how long it takes
I'm dying a little bit because the idea of them being able to make a suckling pig inside of that villa is absolutely hilarious
It is infuriating and he fact that her manager and her assistant work together to violate her privacy like that would have any normal person firing them. it's always surprised to me when these type of characters never seem to have any concern that their boss would immediately fire them for something like this
ye lingfeng is prob her biological father and Qin lie has either figured that out or suspects it
I really don't think they have any space to say that.
I have a serious question was this written by AI? I have never read anything that has giving me so much whiplash going along from one plot to another without giving a reader a chance to breathe. In what I believe has been two or a little under 3 days and over a hundred chapters is almost unbelievable how many events have happened to her in that time. she was reborn, her fiance broke their engagement off, her ex-fiance's uncle came to verify whether or not she actually killed her nanny, she convinced him to take her as his fiance / Foster, she cured the poison of the Mo girl, moved into her new fiance's house, met another love interest who has been obnoxious, revealed that his older brother is illegitimate Oh and her fiance discovered that the Moe family was the ones who were plotting against him with regards to the poison, her nanny was almost killed and she was almost framed for murder again, she's stopped him from getting into a car accident, all of this stuff is too many things to be happening in about 48 to 72 hours it's literally unreasonable for all this to happen before she's gotten to engagement And this isn't even half of it but just comment is getting too long. It would have made more sense for the engagement to have just been scheduled two weeks out or even a month out If this many events need to happen before she actually managed to get engaged we haven't even talked about the randomly change an eye color and him having to try to hide the eye color, The kidnappings the meeting of the Father the death of the Mo girls mother, the jail trip etc etc etc... suspension of disbelief and everything but this is far too ridiculous even for a high fantasy high cultivation as story much less something that seems to be originally set in a realistic world with just a golden finger
it's so frustrated how often she manages to screw herself over because she doesn't assert herself when she needs to she's got mouth for days with everybody else but when it comes to these random people who have done minor favors for her she's out here like oh I can't speak up fast enough I can't enter interrupt because their passion. Like I can understand if it was a family member but this is just somebody who's your boss you could work anywhere heifer