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Upcoming_Region2mthCommentéGhost spider is a vice admiral I believe
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Its really good so far! Try to shorten his skills list so you dont have to write it everytime and continue using grammarly or maybe even google docs
Ce livre a été supprimé. - Upcoming_Region2mthCommenté-Continue stockpiling chapters for Shadow Elemental.
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Its a really good idea and story but try to put it through grammarly first to fix the grammar. KEEP IT UP!!
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Honest opinion, its a good novek personally I like it but the writing quality is EXTREMELY bad. Author please use CHATGPT to fix this problem its really bad. An example in this novel is chapter 11, it calls the new world "United States" all in all its badly translated to the extreme yet its a good concept.
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Im guessing this is him
His mouth looked freakish; he had chelicerae, like that of a spider, except it was made out of flesh like a regular mouth would be. - Upcoming_Region5mthCommenté
The best way I can see this is from rick and morty the hive who controlled planets look it up
An alien species that was unknown to most of the universe that went extinct a long time ago because of their own actions. - Upcoming_Region5mthRépondu à write999
Bro I like the novel but please put it through chatgpt and look through it, its readable but the names are scuffed like bro in chapter 11 it mentions United States in the new world of one piece like bro what?
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I think the author is right though, chakra is awakened by other people helping open the pathways although they can do it by themselves its hard. Keep in mind as well there are multiple wars and its possible parents send them to the schools so they can have a better life. Also why are nukenins going the vilkage?
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Its a really good book but the transitioning needs work since I get confused, mainly the time skip
3.) His Son becoming a Pirate/Marine and switching POVs between 1 or 3 - Upcoming_Region5mthCommenté
Thank you!
(T/N: Translating names of things is a real pain, it was originally written as 'Qingxiao' of the 'eight-treasure navy' from the 'country of flowers' here smh) - Upcoming_Region5mthCommenté
He has a daughter
In his early years, he had an unrequited love for Chief Staff Officer Tsuru, but later he failed, and naturally he did not get married and have children, so he treats Rosinante as his adopted son! - Upcoming_Region5mthCommenté
He was in marines
(T/N: No idea if this actually happened or the author is making this up but we roll with it.) - Upcoming_Region6mthCommenté
yo take ur time most fanfics on here throw it together so thank u for actually investing time appreciate u
You know the chapter Throwdown I put out? (I don't expect you too). I spent over 6 hours researching into the Site, its floorplan and SCPs in there. The same where Murrey lists all those helpfull SCPs kept in Site-19s records. However with Site-19 it was hard because of all the SCPs they had listed there from a source of a madlad from 7 years ago on reddit. With Site-88 (The Site Throwdown takes place in) there were like 8. So I've come to the conclusion that if the story is to go were I want it to, and to help improve wuality in terms with my grammar mistakes. To all you out there I write on my phone and I have massive fingers so I can think I wrote say "quality" but instead I'll type "wuality". That one is very common. - Upcoming_Region6mthRépondu à DaotianshenSimple, she looked like a spider. Her black head had four pairs of red eyes, and her hair resembled centipede legs. Monstrous spider-like mouth, and four sharp spider legs extending from her spine. Her hands looked like sticks.
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yes
Should I keep updating this story? Please comment. - Upcoming_Region6mthCommenté
men
Nah we want sweaty men fighting, hitting their sweaty body with each other (This is no romance btw, just fightings and adventure, just like the real one piece) - Upcoming_Region6mthCommenté
Im not too sure but cant they notice your a ghoul since they have an extreme sense of smell. There sense of smell is shown when they find out kaneki is a one eye'd ghoul since he smelt like both
What would he gain even if the people in this café knew? Only pity, of course, many unnecessary questions, and in the worst case, he would get involved in difficult situations with his mysterious business. - Upcoming_Region6mthCommenté
Currently he is extremely strong I would add it but make it harder and harder to achieve this state since he is around sengokus level show in the war of best
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