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The confluence of Witcher world and Harry Potter world has intriguing possibilities. The story and progression of events were interesting. However, the execution and writing was atrocious. It could have lot better if the author even read the damn thing before publishing. That one small action could have saved this fanfiction. I have gotten tired of read the convoluted way of writing and presenting information and I am no longer continuing this story despite it's interesting story.
Mother! not Father.
The dilogue work is jarring. Why write a single dialogue into mutliple lines, confusing readers into thinking that each line or dialogue was uttered by different characters in the scene? Quite confusing!