I_am_God5

You never complete a story and keep writing others, i don't know what your endgame is

You have a very habit of leaving at cliffhangers, in addition to your slow plot progression, be careful, it may lead to some users dropping your novel, and this is not some advice but a threat

I just hope you don't bring anyone in the new world with you, i mean the other supreme beings

Extreme slow pace, this is so so so irritating

It's not teasing, if he continues this , many of us will drop this

Another Chatgpt writer....😔

The Tyrells are too manipulative , too ambitious , please don't make Viserys marry her

Hmm

This book is already available online with a lot of chapters , just search the name of the book

I don't understand first he told his mom to save her, now he is telling his mom to kill her, what's the point , why save her in the first place then...