its not really a problem since its a fanfic anyway so no-one is making money of of this anyway well except the og authors patreon

the grammar is weird but still readable wish no. 2 and 4 are useless he doesn't need annihilation maker since Majin Buu's powers are already cracked and adapt and evolution is something Buu can already do and in the world of one piece it would of been pretty easy to attribute his powers to a devil fruit but now that annihilation maker is there he cant since the 2 powers are way too different and will have this problem in every world he goes to especially in worlds where people are believed to only have 1 power now the mc got 2

he does... well kind of he asked for a status tab to keep track on growth well i dont think that counts as a system but close enough i guess?

yeah the adapt and evolution is stupid since kid buu can already do that and the annihilation maker wasn't necessary it was just adding on power that wasn't needed since y'know buu can destroy planets which is already more powerful then almost every fictional character that exists(except worlds where gods exist)

first the harem is way too big and second the mc is legit 5 times the age of every harem member(except the bleach ones)

yeah the personality on this one aint the best but i guess it makes sense since he has memories from before goku hit his head so he is still aggressive but i think Jordan's memories should of canceled that

yoooo bro can you give me the name of the drugs you on?

holy crap that doesn't feel right even though this one prob came first

this looks like it was in English then translated to Greek then into unsimplified Chinese then to went through a word scrambler and then a child tried to put it back together then translated back to English like holy crap bro

they did anko dirty in boruto ngl

its already there

no why? he is still 13 not alot of time has passed

yeah that's what the mc said :)

preach brother and momo is pretty much always the first girl and in no harem stories she is always the love interest like other people exist I have nothing against momo it's just overused(she's also not my favorite)

and would help whenever needed

he is the same age... and he was kinda forced to cus if he didn't it would of showed he didn't mean no harm to the league

who doesnt

what are the mc's powers exactly from what I have seen he seems to will something and he can do it but to a limit

that was way more than 500 words and this was 3 scenes you either skipped some of it by mistake or you read to fast probably the latter

no wives here just ejaculate and evacuate