DAKOTA_MORLEY

Hope you're good man

overall, like the story, I just finished reading it. I would wish for it to be continued someday but I understand though. I do know the writer still on this app cuz if go into his profile and his activity he posted like a day ago for me of making this review a comment on another fanfic

you doing awesome work man. keep up the good work

I also think you should dude time skips but put some story in the time. skips like each war Logan participated in has some story. maybe another part of the story because Logan's almost 200 years old like I believe is 1,800 something for his birthday so and he's Canadian because like I said, there is a long time before the MCU happens. so I recommend some timeskips

I'm looking forward to it

honestly at this point I would just rather you use it as a reference to make it your own because it sounds like a kluster fuck because Thor was supposed to calm down in iron Man. 2. cuz colson left cuz he had to go to New Mexico which is where Thor was banished to in iron Man. 2

his dad that spent time in jail

overall very good actually like this story had decent plot and overall I felt clean. it brought to a smile to my face a lot 10 out of 10 recommend

now this is a good story. I'm glad I was able to finish it on his patreon. I actually enjoyed the ending and it felt good I didn't get a full five star because I did find some writing errors like very, very small ones when I was reading aloud and like I said very small I'd like missing a single word or something along those lines. but otherwise good story. recommend 9 out of 10

it's all good man. take your time. life is busy. just don't drop it without giving us a heads up