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Actually it's not the system. It's the voice of the AI controlling the suit
Good book! The system is very interesting and there are a lot of descriptions everywhere. The author tries something unique which is refreshing.
Not quite, but thank you for the comment :)
Thank you very much!
This reminds me of a world sect in the victorian ages. You have a story of a young boy who experiences the harsh reality of life (you don't have to outrun a bear, just your friend) and is given a second chance at life. Instead of an angel offering a deal at redemption, it's a devil instead, which means the plot will have its fair share of bumps and twists. It is definitely more similar to a slow-burn traditional novel, like the author mentions. Looking forward to seeing how it fleshes out.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it even though it's not your genre :D
Thank you for your suggestion!
I've read 4 chapters and I'm conflicted. It's excellent writing, but, I'm confused on the heavy emphasis on Lai. It seems like the man at the beginning was the mafia ceo? That doesn't detract any high marks though. I'm just wondering why the the quick intro.
Honestly, this story is a rare gem! Perfect everything! The development leads you to the next major plot point just when you expect to see it. The characters seem well thought out with their own unique personalities. The mystery in the story keeps you reading. I'm adding it to my collection to read more later :D
Thanks so much!