what? have ya split it into parts?? why?

excellent work, idea, thoughts. keep going like this i want more like this. as you said, my wish is that you write a motivational story for those who left hope from their life. those kinda books that reveals ways to be happy and have a peaceful life. really, your story gives me vibes of reality. its true that what you read with interest, you enter in it. you picked my choice. thank you. if you are seeing this, please accept my wish and fulfil my dreams.

poor alex :> lol

well done. nice idea keep going. one day you will succeed