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Elkannah

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2022-10-06 JointGlobal
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  • Elkannah
    Elkannah1yr
    Répondu à Blooddoctor

    ',shaky' is a cliched word. So I rather not fill my novel.

    my trembling hands took up the pen on the sink, writing out what seemed like a letter. My handwriting was shaky, and my penmanship was not great, but I managed to finish it nonetheless.
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    Elkannah1yr
    Répondu à Blooddoctor

    Thanks. fixing that ASAP

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  • Elkannah
    Elkannah1yr
    Répondu à Blooddoctor

    the only time I used third was during the Queen/ maid scene

    I could only stare with my eyes widened in fear and horror, as the five men in red cloaks and hoods circled a sealed crypt with a weird symbol on the top, murmuring and chanting words I had never heard before and they weren't even witches!
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    Elkannah1yr
    Répondu à Blooddoctor

    Latin😂

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    Elkannah1yr
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    That's first POV and not third. Third is when the writer is telling the story about the characters like; Ambrose said. ..

    I could only stare with my eyes widened in fear and horror, as the five men in red cloaks and hoods circled a sealed crypt with a weird symbol on the top, murmuring and chanting words I had never heard before and they weren't even witches!
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