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I will keep that in mind ;D

Yeah, she will ;)

There will be a time for that sweet, sweet vengeance >:)

The amount of coping...

The Goddess thing felt more like a plot device than a character, but well, it is only chapter 2. Let's see how things unfold.

"Those who make the ultimate sacrifice will never know if they succeeded in their sacrifice, only have Faith that those he protected would succeed." - A random comment I read on a youtube video

It seems like an interesting start. I liked some of the nerd stuff at the beginning like the mention of how much data was in the cafe, and how little the MC starts with in the matter of stats. The writing is cohesive and has a nice flow, you won't get lost through it and can understand the scenes quite easily, with no need to scroll up and down to understand a sentence or a passage. Overall, a nice start for the novel.

A trillion of a gigabyte equals 1.000.000 petabytes, one million petabytes. If it has trillions of gigabytes, and not just a singular one, it is on the house of millions of petabytes I went to search, and one trillion gigabytes is one zetabyte. The internet is estimated to be around 175 zetabytes in space. It means that the game has a sizable fraction of today's internet total space. Ignore it, it is just nerd talk since the numbers tickled my brain.

"Slow as a snail, HP of a fly! Missed an input! Now I d1e!"

That's one fancy name.