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thanks for the chapter
thanks for the chapter i really like the story
this was the worst chapter so far
thanks for the chapter
thanks for the chapter
thanks for the chapter
thanks for the chapter
good chapter even if i didn't like the mc i would like you to explain why he lives his life following someone else's ideals since at the moment it only seems like he is a child following his father's rules instead of living and make your own decisions so doing that would make mc much better hope you keep up the great work
honestly i was really excited when i saw this story but after seeing the mc and the way he thinks and acts i really started to lose the will to read this story but i'll wait a few more chapters to see what happens i hope you get it making the mc not look like an idiot who speaks his mind without any kind of filter and doesn't fight back even though he's beaten up for no reason and his father's excuse is pretty ridiculous in my opinion
probably on saturday or sunday