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I need more chapters! So good!

Totally agree.

Have been buying chapters this month, but this goes way 2 slow. If you actuallly want people 2 read your stuff you gotta make it interesting. Not boring and short like the last chapters.

Good writing🙏🏻

I like this novel generally but please dont make tenkus identity reaper like a baby. Dont make him explain himself like he is guilty. It doesnt fit his character. Ideally you should rewrite this chapter.

Well done! Favourite series atm. Also love that the price inst that high so it is possible to always stay on track👍

But why did he cultivate for 16 years then? Did he just sit in a cave for 14 yeara doing nothing? That seems weirder to me. Originalmy I thought this rule was specifically for humans, which is why I wrote the comment in the first place.

Seriously. Cultivating for 16 years to not get 1 major realm stronger? I wonder if you made a big mistake early, or if this book is gonna timeskip 50 and 100 years at a time soon to make up for this Seems kinda dumb to me. These are important things to think through.

Good. But I really hope you think about the power scaling here. Max seemed weak compared to these kids when you think about how long he have trained. This will become a boring series if max isnt much stronger than Ana, and it doesnt look like it is going in this direction. No direct criticism. Just something to think about.

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