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I am nothing just an 18 year old homesick boy who likes anime so I started to write a story but I am still noob so, I am not that great right now, that's all
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aniket_keer23dCommentéCh 26 The Future Threat!- aniket_keer1mthCommenté
who?
...and she simply answered, 'To kill them all who can become a threat to her.'" - aniket_keer1mthCommenté
what the___!??
Aiden tightly gripped the stone, immediately using it to strike the girl's neck repeatedly—second, third, and countless more times. The girl's screams were accompanied by the rhythmic percussion of rocks striking her neck. - aniket_keer1mthPosté
overall novel is very good, English is on point and characters are very interesting, this novel is quite similar to ( heroine are trying to kill ) but there are still some unique point to it. I just have problem with its harem plot because that make novel quite boring in future. and author, try to make protagonist as painful as much you can, that will make readers heart soft for him and that will make your novel much more popular well that much I can tell, now it is your decision if you follow them or not. bye best of luck
- aniket_keer1mthRépondu à Noob6_writer9
- aniket_keer1mthRépondu à Joyon
sorry but I have dropped this novel because of the language mess up
Ratatouille was another of my Golem friends and also one of the Anti-Saints, Greed. - aniket_keer1mthCommenté
how many golem does he have?
Ratatouille was another of my Golem friends and also one of the Anti-Saints, Greed. - aniket_keer1mthCommenté
I didn't expected oliver would be there
Without a word, we joined them: Ethan, Oliver, Shyamal, and Arianell. - aniket_keer2mthCommenté
why I only feel cringed at that line?
Meanwhile, in the main hall, Sillian seemed to snap back to reality, escaping the trance she had entered. "Wow, that smell was incredible. It felt like I dove into a river of flowers. How is it possible for someone like that to exist, and I didn't know? I thought Michael had a pleasant scent, but it's nothing compared to this human-shaped garden." - aniket_keer4mthRépondu à Someone_who_voted
you are correct!
"Sorry, that (Full) means that both the protagonist and antagonist roles are no longer available." - aniket_keer4mthCommenté
who was the flex?
Dante and Amaris sat in the seats next to Cale, while Hope and Felix sat diagonally across from them. - aniket_keer4mthCommenté
bro! future candidate of mc friends are way more powerful then Elliot friends
Dante was already a D+. Amaris was not far behind him and had a D grade. Hope and Felix were E+. - aniket_keer4mthCommenté
didn't you said dente was commoner?
Meanwhile, when Jessica's students arrived, she told them to train and watched them. She looked at the ones who caught her eye. Apart from Dante, Amaris, Damien, Felix, Sylvie, Elliot, Amy, Veronica, these students came from eleven elite families. - aniket_keer4mthCommenté
where is ?
---> Monarch Aura (Level SSS --> Grade E+) [Active Skill] - aniket_keer5mthCommenté
bhag milkha bhag!😂
Run Lloyd Run! - aniket_keer5mthCommenté
I know!
[A/N: If you want to know about his book, then feel free to ask. I'd like to explain 'The Dawn' briefly because I think it isn't a real book. I just made it up while writing this chapter.] - aniket_keer7mthRépondu à Farry_Tale
are you a relationship coach ?!
However, this is not a good thing to do. When you decide to part ways and finish your relationship with someone, you shouldn't think about them anymore. This is what it should be, and most people would accept that fact too.detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantaisie · Darkness_Enjoyer - aniket_keer7mthCommenté
she is definitely the one who did that!
"I am deeply sorry for your loss, Emma. I hope we can catch those people who have a hand in this conspiracy."detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantaisie · Darkness_Enjoyer - aniket_keer7mthCommenté
but who did this ?
After that, it was pretty much a normal investigation, and soon it found that those kids were poisoned with a drug that would make them hypnotized as well as reveal their inner desires.detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantaisie · Darkness_Enjoyer