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It is a good story. I have read the first few chapters and I found the plot and the background interesting. The characters are also good. Keep it up.

The story is good. The characters are specially good. If you want to read something different then you must try this one. The world background is also good enough. Readability is good. Might work on flow of the sentences, but overall the story is a good read.