AkurayRadiata

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... Mc X nephis ???

Honestly, it would be really cool to link him to Shiva, imagine him as a mini Arjuna alter or something that involves destruction... I don't know exactly but it would be cool

Scáthach...

The work is simply perfect, it starts out different because it's a Shadow Slave fanfic, then there's the quality of the writing, which is perfect, and the background, which mimics Shadow Slave but shows originality on the part of the author, especially the main character, who is op, but not too op, and has room to grow. The author has managed to maintain the personalities of the original characters and give them depth, and has managed to integrate the ringmaster without it seeming forced. The background and the story, if it follows the plot, will be very good, according to the canon, but in the future it will have changes and if it continues the way it is it will be wonderful. Yes, a perfect fanfic, the only reason I don't give it 5 stars is because you don't release a chapter every day.

Thank you very much for the chapter, honestly the work has less than 30 chapters and is already one of my favorites, where it is part of my 4 favorites, along with 'A Nascent Kaleidoscope' by AStoryForOne and the works of Fate by 'Nim The Writer' (an archer promisse and a false family reborn). I hope it continues at this pace (which is perfect, with changes to the original line but not too different, maintaining the originality of 'shadow slave'), without anything too forced, especially in relation to the 'harem', where many works end up being a bit boring as in 'Nascent Kaleidoscope'. And once again I ask, if you can, for a changeable star for harem ....

Seriously, she's not going to appear in the MC's novel anyway? I'm going back to reading shadow slave now, I stopped at the chapter where sunny helps her sister at school with the break there ... Of course, depriving Sunny of his "master" would be a bit annoying, but it's a fanfic, right? That's just my opinion, but thanks a lot for the chapter, later on it would be good to consider it for the 'harem' ...

Picture ?

I don't think he's changed for the worse, Mc did what he could for his family and always kept a cool head regardless of the situation, but he had his bottom line, which maintained his "human" morals, which was his family. Now there's nothing moral left, that's why he's become a true Aizen, who has no remorse about doing what he has to do, except that when he's touched in the wound, that's when he explodes, as I said before, he's unstable in relation to his parents, an open wound...