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Does time travel exist in this novel? and the system is being explained to why it exist?
Thanks! I will keep on improving.
Thank for checking my novel out, more importantly please don't give up on writing. I hope you have a wonderful journey ahead.
You describe her so well that I can tell she is an adorable person.
I am still learning to become a better writer, and I appreciate your compliment. I will continue to strive to do my best. I have checked out your work as well, and I noticed that it is filled with descriptive sentences that draw me into your story. You have a knack for telling rather than showing, and it is captivating.
with this much energy
I appreciate you taking the time to read my novel. I acknowledge that the first thirty chapters may be filled with repetition and information dumps, but I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.
The first chapter already give reader so much glimpse into female lead's perspective and how she see the world. Wow, nice job from the author. Moreover, you really know how to show and not tell, I find this kind of story to be very enjoyable to read. There are so much potential for this story!