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It's good and immersive but the first half of Chp 1 was hard to read. What I mean is I personally find it dumb when a situation is overly exaggerated. I mean how did Valeria not receive backlash for openly admitting she's basically dumb and used someone to pass school. But it is, what it is.

It's pretty good. Usually system novels are cringe to me but this isn't. I'll probably keep this as a go to read.

All that for 1 exp point smh.

He don't want her aint nothing gay about that😮‍💨.

Please no 😭

It's pretty good I ain't gonna lie. I can't say that I will read it whenever I can, but it will be one of my top 5 choices when I want to read something. 👍

What about his girlfriend? Either Aoroi is still naive or his betrayal and heartbreak wasn't that bad.

While this is an interesting turn of events, I do think Aoroi should've added a condition. It's like he completely forgot his whole reason for revenge. So I think it would've added to the revenge idea if he said something like " I'll choose the second option but help me get revenge on someone" or similar in that idea.

I didn't give you a 5/5 because in the words of one of my English teachers, "Nothing is perfect". This does not detract from my positive thoughts about the writing. I believe the describing and flow is impeccable. Personally, I like novels that I can picture myself as the narrator or protagonist. Yet, it's novels like this that just have good writing that doesn't deter me away from reading. In conclusion I like it and that matters.