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A_Vylet7mthCommentéCh 12 chapter 12 : The Beginning of Problems- A_Vylet10mthRépondu à K_Log
He knows to much...
As expected, the idea didn't come out very well ... The last thing I saw in his memories was 8 strange eyes on some damn thing that attacked me, but fortunately, apparently, I'm alive. And here I am from my planet, killed by some kind of garbage that fell from the roof. Hanging in the middle of the void in some tights, hellishly hungry, and most importantly. - A_Vylet11mthRépondu à Random_Entity
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- A_Vylet11mthRépondu à Akisu
Thanks, for showing the mistake I missed. Sometimes when I feel tired or lazy, I just write drafts in my first language and then machine translate them to English, and then when I am getting back home I am fixing everything. But most of the time I am using English for drafts, that's why sometimes you can see these mistakes and sometimes it's to clean to spot any, For example, Tayana and Taiana, When it's Tayana I wrote it myself, when Taiana it's the translator lol.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - A_Vylet11mthCommenté"The one who hired us! Assistant of Kingpin! They crossed his path, and he does not forgive! I'll tell you everything, please don't kill me!"
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*The most peacfull Viltrumite in collors*
Viltrumite. - A_Vylet11mthRépondu à OldFellow
About the harem, I didn't even think this far and didn't plan anything yet for the love interest. I will develop the story first and finish with Ark Winter Solider before moving on and thinking about everything else. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time for writing, this is my hobby in my free time and for learning new experiences, so it will be some time before I create a new future for Helmut.
Ch 4 Not a chapter - A_Vylet11mthRépondu à Darth_Evolution898
It still will keep being MCU, but adding something new is risky for sure. Something new will change the future of the story entirely, but we have Viltrumite already on the planet that is going psycho slowly so leaving MCU Universe untouched is already impossible.
Should I add one spider man to the story or both? - A_Vylet11mthRépondu à
I know right
Should I add one spider man to the story or both? - A_Vylet11mthCommentéI already deleted around 2k+ words and rewrote it while I was in the cafe, but now coming home I feel like I a made mistake. Gona rewrite this now. What do you think?
- A_Vylet11mthCommentéI already deleted around 2k+ words and rewrote it while I was in the cafe, but now coming home I feel like I a made mistake. Gona rewrite this now. What do you think?
- A_Vylet11mthRépondu à Adiavts
Thanks ^^ I forgot about Jarvis, brain lag detected
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- A_Vylet1yrCommentéThe man walked past the rows of warriors in what looked like a spaceship runway. All were different in gender and skin color. But everyone had two things in common. White uniforms, tight-fitting toned bodies, with a rag that covered the protruding dignity and eyes, burning with patriotism.
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